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    dots Submission Name: Assemblydots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    Bytes: 494



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    dotsAssemblydots
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    Assembly

    Here
    Let me help
    Develop your skill

    So that you’ll be unique
    As gods are unique

    All mysteries solved
    According to formulae

    All different the same
    All different the same

    A solo duet
    With a single duality

    Everything’s fine
    No need to cry

    Everything’s fine
    See? That didn’t hurt




    Submitted on 2008-07-08 17:36:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This reminds me of writing poetry and then the profs trying to fit it into their preconceived ideas of what poetry is.

    The isness is the poetry and anything that takes us back into a formula, just isn't.

    Like you, I only want the new stuff, please!
    you take care,

    Nan

    | Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      there are rules to be unique, you say? in regards to your writing tutoring? must feel strange having to hold onto that, a syllabus it seems you're not very agreeable to.

    my formulae, recently explained to a colleague, was:
    a + b = arse.
    the square root of a is
    go f.uck yourself.

    that explained my view of this world perfectly in those moments of utter desperation and futility.

    yep.
    | Posted on 2008-07-14 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]
      This makes me think of an assembly line,
    or propaganda line.
    Also makes me think of that current fascination with the idea that no one wins and no one loses, and we all live happily in that neutral zone of 'fine'.
    A thought-provoking write, thanks for sharing.


    | Posted on 2008-07-10 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      I have probably said this before, but I like that your work makes me think. And I am sure I am off the mark as I go on one of my little tangents... but hey, I try. It is all I can do as opposed to not trying at all. (smile).

    Ah... uniqueness. I remember a time when I was unique (hehehe). But it was a lesson to get that 'all different the same' part of living in the world amongst others... I think it takes an extraordinary person to truly be unique in the sense that they stand apart from the ordinary, the norm, the usual.

    This almost feels like one is being told that they are unique, when they really aren't. kinda like: see, johnny is special, isn't he? look how he wipes drool from his chin... like no other, I tell ya.

    hmmmm...

    there are a couple of ways I could go with this.

    fine always reminds me of this acronym that was drilled into me -

    f.ucked up
    insecure
    neurotic &
    emotional
    | Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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