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    dots Submission Name: An empty hopedots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAn empty hopedots
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    Sometimes I wish to go sleep and never awake. Wish to cut myself deep enough and let my sorrow run out. To cry unitl I'm numb and no longer feel my broken soul. That only one day I can pull my life's trigger and be no more. Wishing that all this darkness will someday turn gray-It's perpetually blinding me of sanity-The only thing to do is hope and wish while my life slowly creeps. From sorrow to sorrow, from tear to tear, and from gray to an unending darkness....




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