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    dots Submission Name: that one guydots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 600
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    Bytes: 896



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    Find a guy that calls you beautiful instead of hot, who cals you back when you hang up on him, who will stay wake just to see you sleeping. Wait for the guy who want sto show you off to the world whe you think you look your worst. Wait for that guy who is constantly reminding you how much he care about you and how lucky he is to have you. Wait for the one who won't ever let you down, who will always love you no matter what. Find a guy that when you look in his eyes, you see him looking back. Who you can see yourself grow old with. Wait for the guy who brings you flower-without reason. Wait for the one who says you're the brightest star in his sky, and you're the reason he believes in forever. And says that he dosen't want to ever love another but you. Find that one who will go to the end of the universe and beyond...only to prove that you are his and only his....




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      Typos!!! You spelled calls wrong, wants to is wrong, when is missing his 'n', flower should be flowers, and doesn't is spelled wrong too. SLOW DOWN. This is a great idea to write about how you man should love you but so many typos it's bothersome to read. It should be a poem.
    | Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by esterhzys | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats so true, at least thats what u and my girlfren told me before

    Good write
    Straight to the point

    BVG
    | Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by b_v_grant | [ Reply to This ]


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