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    dots Submission Name: I Die Dailydots
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    Author: Themissingshado
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 23/45/26
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 120
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1310



    Description:
       confusion in losing love


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    dotsI Die Dailydots
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    I am a coward
    life is my greatest fear
    so i stopped hoping for a better tomorrow
    so much sorrow
    open my wounds
    watch them bleed
    cold black earth come swallow me

    let me die
    break my heart for me
    let me bath in this romantic tragedy
    juliet my worse regret
    oh now you can't save me
    please erase me
    with you i die daily

    i'll leave a note
    you'll finally know
    i'm done your stupid games
    it's time for a change
    you build me up just to break me down
    and i'm scared of the future
    what's there to see
    because without you it's the end of me

    let me die
    break my heart for me
    let me bath in this romantic tragedy
    juliet my worse regret
    oh now you can't save me
    please erase me
    with you i die daily

    yeah, i die daily...

    Let me go! let me go! i don't know! just let me go....!

    let me die
    break my heart for me
    let me bath in this romantic tragedy
    juliet my worse regret
    oh now you can't save me
    please erase me
    with you i die daily







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      That is exactly how I feel right now. I feel as if I am dying everyday of my life and when people try to save me it makes me wanna die even more. Beautiful poem with everything that I have been feeling in my mind. I came on the site to write a poem today but instead I'm going to fav yours because it says it all and maybe I will write one as well.
    | Posted on 2008-10-03 00:00:00 | by Rachel Ruff | [ Reply to This ]



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