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I Die Daily


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 202
Class/Type: Lyrics /Depressed
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Description:


confusion in losing love


I Die Daily



I am a coward
life is my greatest fear
so i stopped hoping for a better tomorrow
so much sorrow
open my wounds
watch them bleed
cold black earth come swallow me

let me die
break my heart for me
let me bath in this romantic tragedy
juliet my worse regret
oh now you can't save me
please erase me
with you i die daily

i'll leave a note
you'll finally know
i'm done your stupid games
it's time for a change
you build me up just to break me down
and i'm scared of the future
what's there to see
because without you it's the end of me

let me die
break my heart for me
let me bath in this romantic tragedy
juliet my worse regret
oh now you can't save me
please erase me
with you i die daily

yeah, i die daily...

Let me go! let me go! i don't know! just let me go....!

let me die
break my heart for me
let me bath in this romantic tragedy
juliet my worse regret
oh now you can't save me
please erase me
with you i die daily







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  That is exactly how I feel right now. I feel as if I am dying everyday of my life and when people try to save me it makes me wanna die even more. Beautiful poem with everything that I have been feeling in my mind. I came on the site to write a poem today but instead I'm going to fav yours because it says it all and maybe I will write one as well.
| Posted on 2008-10-03 00:00:00 | by Rachel Ruff | [ Reply to This ]


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