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    dots Submission Name: Stay with youdots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 81
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 483



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    dotsStay with youdots
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    I asked God to send me an angel
    But everyday was still the same
    I finally decided to change something...
    I let love in
    Now everything is shining
    There's never a cloud in the skys
    Now threw thick and thin...
    Im gonna stay with you
    You've helped me reach my dreams
    You've given me that something
    That I needed everyday
    You gave me something they call Love
    So now im gonna stay with you




    Submitted on 2008-07-09 17:28:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i enjoyed reading this. it could use alittle more detail but all around i liked it.


    P.s u write alot of love poems i like that keep it up
    | Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by essence of life | [ Reply to This ]


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