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    dots Submission Name: Is Love?dots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 73
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    Bytes: 404



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       just a random poemish thought


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    dotsIs Love?dots
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    Is love infinite?

    Is love true?

    Is love even real?

    All around me I see Love
    In every movie there is Love
    Every sentence ends with Love
    So tell me what is this thing called Love?
    Is it as long lasting as they say?
    Is it as truthful as they say?
    Is it as real as they say?
    If so why can't I find it?




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    ||| Comments |||
      Thats called being in Love babe... it hits you different each and every time. Its always a unique experience (and yet woefully the same). Its such a hard thing to define, because it IS infinite, as well as indefinite, its always changing. What your love was yesterday... might not be the form it takes tomorrow. Its such an intense feeling, such a question for the ages. I love the way you pose such a simple yet complex question to the people reading your poem, begging them to almost give their own definitions. in the last line you want to replace "fine" with "find". And it seems to me... like youve done a good job to find your own love anyways hun... take some time and think on it. It may not be the Hollywood definition.... but I can read between every word you type me, and you are absolutely infatuated.
    | Posted on 2008-07-12 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]


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