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    dots Submission Name: Trials and Tribulationsdots
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    Author: MC white
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71/73/45
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTrials and Tribulationsdots
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    I'm free
    free flowing as the sea
    free falling and its gnawing
    at the very core of me

    I'm interred as if I'm dead
    by this slowly seeping dread
    but I have and will do nothing
    till my whole life I retread

    reminisce and ruminate
    throw back wide the close-shut gates
    of my failure stash
    as I come in last
    in my lowly life-long race




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