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Submission Name: what is this feeling dots

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Author:	draconus
ASL Info:	16/male/uk
Elite Ratio:	1.73 - 45/91/55
Words:	94

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Venting
Total Views:	67
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need some help to know what i am feeling hear. plz coomment

what is this feeling dots

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it happened only last night
walking down the street with a new friend
talking about our dreams and hopes

stating what we want to be
and who we are.

but i cant stop feeling something
i dont know what it is
i wish i could explian it
i think it's love.

do you feel love if someone give you an item to borrow
as they leave for a long journey.

i find myself dancing in the street over the joy i feel..............

whats going on.????????

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your feelings are out there reaching for new heights. good job. keep writing. check out my page
| Posted on 2008-07-17 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
_Perhaps you are glad your friend is leaving?
_Perhaps they have grown into something beautiful?
_Perhaps you are proud to know a good person for once?

I dont know what love is. but i beleive this feeling you have will fade soon. just like sweet foods eventually get dull.
| Posted on 2008-07-10 00:00:00 | by Bozly | [ Reply to This ]

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