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    dots Submission Name: what is this feelingdots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 813
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 572



    Description:
       need some help to know what i am feeling hear. plz coomment


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    dotswhat is this feelingdots
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    it happened only last night
    walking down the street with a new friend
    talking about our dreams and hopes

    stating what we want to be
    and who we are.

    but i cant stop feeling something
    i dont know what it is
    i wish i could explian it
    i think it's love.

    do you feel love if someone give you an item to borrow
    as they leave for a long journey.

    i find myself dancing in the street over the joy i feel..............


    whats going on.????????




    Submitted on 2008-07-09 20:43:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You'll figuire it out baby!
    I'm here for you!
    These things have a tendancy to sort themselves out!
    I love you!
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    Katt
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    | Posted on 2008-12-31 00:00:00 | by randombamfan | [ Reply to This ]
      your feelings are out there reaching for new heights. good job. keep writing. check out my page
    | Posted on 2008-07-17 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      _Perhaps you are glad your friend is leaving?
    _Perhaps they have grown into something beautiful?
    _Perhaps you are proud to know a good person for once?

    I dont know what love is. but i beleive this feeling you have will fade soon. just like sweet foods eventually get dull.
    | Posted on 2008-07-10 00:00:00 | by Bozly | [ Reply to This ]


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