I like this for what it was I think, or what I got out of it. That is to say that most people don't really appreciate the divinity of human characteristics. I think that this is what it is about, you give the Gods admirable traits by todays society, like the tan and brownness. It says something about the way the writer views Gods, much like people view other people but like I said, with perfection and divinity, that is to say I think that humans are this way. And I could just be interpreting like that of my own perspectives, but what I could get from this was that there is a general lack of appreciation for that which is truly human, a lack of appreciation for the quality and the gift of being part of life, being part of the creative force that you could call Gods or Goddesses. Overall I like this piece, the imagery was well done, the message was interpretive, the flow was like that of water cascading down friendly pebbles. Great write.
Submission Name: Land of Rhye
