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    dots Submission Name: The Dragon Thronedots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 1042/1118/535
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsThe Dragon Thronedots
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    I galloped on my pale ghost steed,
    Above the broken battlements,
    I lead wan legions at flank speed
    Across the wind swept continents.

    My hands are white and all of bone,
    My horse as sheer as ashen gauze,
    I rule now from the dragon throne,
    A throne that’s built of dragons’ jaws.

    Above the sandy shores of Time
    I ride and ride, my gray host send
    From polar realms to balmy clime
    Upon a trail that will not end.

    Look on the winter’s midnight storm,
    At snow swirls that go spooling there,
    Then at your hearth so bright and warm
    Know that we teem upon the air.

    Now mark my men of cloudy white
    Each marshal column, silver bars
    That streak across this winter night
    And ride until we storm the stars.





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      Aaaah, excellent ghostly muse, with strong word and action pictures! One can virtually envision the ghostly warrior on his ghost steed, galloping in the trail of Stardust at flank speed! I hope I dream of lovely ladies on Mystic Shores when I doze off, and not this ghastly warrior!
    | Posted on 2008-07-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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