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    dots Submission Name: Never Thought I would Fall In Love So Fastdots
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    Author: MurphyGirl44
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 70/76/25
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsNever Thought I would Fall In Love So Fastdots
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    Never thought I’d fall in love so fast…
    I miss your eyes dark but alive at the same time
    a reflection of the love we shared inside them.
    I miss your smile, every time you smiled my heart would race
    pumping the love I had for you through my veins.
    I miss your voice, how it would echo throughout my head at night
    as I looked up at the stars
    I miss everything about you...
    If I could just go back in time,
    I would have changed what I had done.
    I hid myself from you…but you broke our love
    Promised me forever…forever didn’t last
    I still think of you…every single day
    Wondering if you remember the love I can’t forget
    Never thought you would fall out of love so fast…




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      i know you miss that special love. your feelings are crying out with so much passion. this a sweet piece.
    | Posted on 2008-07-22 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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