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    dots Submission Name: Not a Chancedots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 23/161/138
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNot a Chancedots
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    Why does your voice tremble?
    You made your choice, simple
    There will be no turning back
    Once you cross that path
    You know he'll be yours and I'll be gone

    I told you to really think hard and long
    The day's delay choice you made was wrong
    You'll see what I mean when it's too late
    This is your fault, don't you blame fate
    The burdens you bare will weigh a ton

    You never really did think things completely through
    When your world falls and I'm not here what will you do?
    Had you stayed our life would be forever set
    We were happy but it was not quite there yet
    Now I'm coming to realize how to cope

    I've decided that I should not resist
    Ignore the nightmares of our first kiss
    I've quit trying to become happy
    Quit thinking always of what could be
    It's hard to be hurt if you give up all hope




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