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    dots Submission Name: Scareddots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    16/f/china
    Elite Ratio:    6.35 - 195/131/115
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 58
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    It's our last chance at joy
    At watching stars scrape the sky
    In a dance of beauty
    A dance of solitary smiles
    And forgotten secrecy

    Scared because we haven't stopped running
    Since leaving home a lifetime ago
    Scared because we aren't going to forget
    What we tried so hard not to remember

    Scared because I have scars
    Lined up in stories along my feet
    which walked miles past the destination
    In hopes to feel something more real than you ever were to me

    Because it wasn't love
    It never was
    And we left because we were afraid of falling deeper
    Scared because it's our last chance of living
    Before we end up dying
    In eachothers hurting arms
    beside waves which slapped you in the face

    We are scared of turning into sand along the shore
    Which will never make glass rainbows across your room
    Because you won't get a chance to see them
    If it doesn't work out.

    Lets hope.
    Unless we are too scared to




    Submitted on 2008-07-10 23:46:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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