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    dots Submission Name: Daddy's Little Girl No More!dots
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    Author: sapphyreravyn
    ASL Info:    16/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 3/15/21
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 95
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 534



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       Don't you just hate fathers and their crazy way of thinking everything they do is for your own good. Why can't they just let us figure out what is for our own good!


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    dotsDaddy's Little Girl No More!dots
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    Father please hear me,
    I'm lost inside this body.
    Inside there is a war
    And I think I'm losing.
    I just wanted to feel loved
    Wanted to think
    I was your little girl.
    But the veil has been lifted.
    The illusions are gone.
    I know now,
    My father was never there.
    He was a image formed from imagination.
    And that little girl is gone,
    Leaving you to see
    The girl you made me to be
    The girl I don't want to be.
    Me!




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