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    dots Submission Name: Grammardots
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    Author: Sir Jimeth
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 69/37/34
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1729



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       Useless, but I'm annoyed by unfixed typos.
    (Comedy? I've no idea)


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    dotsGrammardots
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    How autistic of you, the director had said
    Autistic?
    Autistic.
    You sure about that?
    Autistic, the director said, what are you herd of hearing?
    I've heard of hearing. I think. But autistic
    I don't understand.
    Well, I didn't ask it you heard of hearing,
    autistic people are very creative
    you put this peace and that peace together
    so wel.
    Artistic? He asked.
    Thats what I said.
    Autistic, that's what you said.
    It's just a typo, you get what I mean, I know reason
    to chane it sea?
    That's maddening, he said, you know what it
    is, you know what to do, but you leave it alone
    without a care.
    Look guy, she said, I know what you mean, and know
    I don't sea the poblem with that.
    He wondered, if the script was worth
    balking. So he took a
    quick peek and was distressed to see
    that nowhere she spoke was free.
    You talk in typos, he said.
    Well, I wouldn't know abot that.
    Abbot? Oh no. Just tell me please, why
    won't you fix up your words?
    Because, she said, win writing and
    feeling, correctness ain't so appeeling
    anymore than rimes and all that.
    The confusion, he began
    Can be solved by the reader, she ended.
    Wouldn't it be simpler and certainly quicker
    if you just fixed up your act?
    Sure, she said, but what a hedache
    to chane all these things when they're
    just a other with no real distraction.
    Be careful he said, you know how pandas feel about that.
    We should just just leaf it at that.




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      Ha. Very clever. I have nothing useful to say (sorry). But I just thought I'd let you know that I think this is extremely witty, and I totally agree. Typos drive me nuts.

    Keep writing,
    ~Venia
    | Posted on 2008-08-18 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh god I so feel you on this one. Uncorrected typos are friggin annoying. Now of course someone may not have noticed but if you've been told and don't change it. ugh. ok going back to read more above.
    Love it, didn't know what the panda part meant, but it might be a typo of a word I don't know.
    Was frustrating to read her part, Because I just wanted to knock the hell out of her, and I remember having a conversation similiar to this part,

    win writing and
    feeling, correctness ain't so appeeling

    I remember saying something like that, why bother they know what I mean and its the feeling that counts

    Anyway lovely job
    Vynom

    | Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      omfg I love this. I can relate to it really well, and was that an allusion to Eats Shoots and Leaves I saw? Anyways I am guilty of this and I thought your presentation of this crime was very awesome. Personally I thought it was even more funny considering I could easily put myself into the "she said" position, while at the same time I love that [censored] book, which I took from,
    "Be careful he said, you know how pandas feel about that.
    We should just just leaf it at that."

    Very Clever-Head
    | Posted on 2008-07-12 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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