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    dots Submission Name: Butterfly Kissesdots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 555
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 522



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    dotsButterfly Kissesdots
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    Flutter around me
    Touching me softly
    Such a beautiful sight

    Many surround you
    Garden in the meadow
    Wings of an angel

    Godís most beautiful creatures
    Flutter
    Around me as I sigh

    Angelic voices
    Silenced by choices
    That we shall not understand

    Butterflies kisses upon me
    A gift from God I know
    Butterflies kisses upon me
    I just sit back and close my eyes
    It takes to the sky




    Submitted on 2008-07-11 17:31:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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