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Butterfly Kisses

Author: Cordell
ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592 /807 /392
Words: 73
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 1204
Average Vote:    4.5000
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Butterfly Kisses

Flutter around me
Touching me softly
Such a beautiful sight

Many surround you
Garden in the meadow
Wings of an angel

God’s most beautiful creatures
Around me as I sigh

Angelic voices
Silenced by choices
That we shall not understand

Butterflies kisses upon me
A gift from God I know
Butterflies kisses upon me
I just sit back and close my eyes
It takes to the sky

Submitted on 2008-07-11 17:31:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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