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    dots Submission Name: A Beautiful Daydots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Nature
    Total Views: 550
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1402



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    dotsA Beautiful Daydots
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    The sun is warm and its nice outside
    The children laughing passing by
    The woman in the corner laughs
    She meets her lover from the past
    As I say

    (Chorus)
    Beautiful day
    It is
    A beautiful day

    Beautiful way
    It is
    A beautiful way
    To wake up, wake up, wake up this morning

    Beautiful day
    Beautiful way
    It is

    Hanging in the corner with my friends
    Lots to talk about
    Never ends
    Ice cream truck just passed along
    Singing that mesmeric ice cream song

    (Chorus)
    Beautiful day
    It is
    A beautiful day

    Beautiful way
    It is
    A beautiful way
    To wake up, wake up, wake up this morning

    Beautiful day
    Beautiful way
    It is

    (Bridge)
    The sun shining, shining down on me
    Lovely weather, lovely weather just for me
    Enough to ride to the lake
    Beautiful day only God could make

    (Chorus)
    Beautiful day
    It is
    A beautiful day

    Beautiful way
    It is
    A beautiful way
    To wake up, wake up, wake up this morning

    Beautiful day
    Beautiful way
    It is

    Beautiful day
    Beautiful way
    It is 2xs




    Submitted on 2008-07-11 17:33:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yeah it's really beautiful day i liked it and i just look forward to hear it someday.
    | Posted on 2008-07-13 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]


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