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    dots Submission Name: Love It When...dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 556
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    dotsLove It When...dots
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    Love it when you make me laugh
    Love it when you touch my hair
    Make me smile when I’m sad
    And show me that you care

    You lift me up high and take to another world
    A place where I can always be with you
    Where the skies are colored and swirled
    And we have so much laughing to do

    … … … … … … …

    Tickle me in places you only know
    Kiss my lips the way I love you too
    Let the world go and move into my life
    And make our life one instead of two

    You lift me up high and take to another world
    A place where I can always be with you
    Where the skies are colored and swirled
    And we have so much laughing to do

    … … … … … … …

    Love it when you have a smile on your face
    Love it when you and I are so happy
    And how you always take me to a new place
    And I don’t care as long as your there with me




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