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    dots Submission Name: Soccer Balldots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    17/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 252/239/191
    Words: 306
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 42
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1821



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       i was kinda mad at the time I wrote this.


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    dotsSoccer Balldots
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    I wish that I could be in your arms tonight.
    Because without you my heart feels so tight.
    I wish I could hear your voice one more time.
    But the problem is that you're no longer mine.
    Yet I still get mad whenever you don't call.
    It feels like you are treating my heart like a soccer ball.
    Yet I still get mad whenever you don't call.
    You're kicking my heart around, like a soccer ball.

    Is it fun when you kick my heart around
    When will you stop pounding it into the ground.
    I let you steal my heart and soul.
    But your soccer ball won't make the goal.

    I just let you play around with my emotions.
    But I hope by now that you've had all your fun.
    Cause it is time I kicked you out my mind.
    I can't believe I let you stay for all this time.
    Yet I still get mad whenever you don't call.
    It feels like you are treating my heart like a soccer ball.
    Yet I still get mad whenever you don't call.
    You're kicking my heart around, like a soccer ball.

    Is it fun when you kick my heart around
    When will you stop pounding it into the ground.
    I let you steal my heart and soul.
    But your soccer ball won't make the goal.

    Now I won't get mad when you decide not to call
    Because I am taking away your soccer ball.
    And I won't get mad because now I won't call.
    I won't need you after I have your soccer ball.

    Is it fun when you kick my heart around
    When will you stop pounding it into the ground.
    I let you steal my heart and soul.
    But your soccer ball won't make the goal.







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