I remember feeling like that! i was like, five years old, and summer seemed like it lasted for years, and it was as if you had forever to do anything. Just to let you know, I am not great when it comes to commenting on poems, I am only good on commenting on storys, problem is, storys are to long, for my atenttion spand. so, if my comments are really cheap, its just cause i don't really know how to exspresse how i feel about your poems. but they really are good, I really do like them. I just arn't very good on giving advice.
I know what you mean about summer I think. Like when I was a little kid and it seemed like a long time. Ahhh, the have such perspectives now. Anyways, this was sweet and I like the way you introduced the nostalgic theme.
Submission Name: Endless Summer of Your Smile
