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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye My Lovedots
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    Author: GrIm:)ReApEr
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 27/24/14
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Story/Them
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    dotsGoodbye My Lovedots
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    A man.
    His wife.
    Getting home late.
    Waking up early.
    Lipstick on his shirts.
    No colour the wife owns.
    Days go by.
    Weeks go by.
    "Where is he?". Askes his wife.
    She follows him.
    There's a seedie bar.
    She puts on her blonde wig.
    Pushes open the door.
    Finds it hard to breath.
    Searches the room.
    See's a dark figure approach the stage.
    Turns to go.
    Thinks better of it.
    Whats that?.
    Her husband, standing on stage.
    She hardly notices the make up, silver dress and fake nails.
    Thats her man.
    Her rock.
    Standing on the stage, in a frock.
    Now she knows, Where he goes.
    He's singing now.
    His eyes glance at the audience.
    He STOPS!
    He sees her.
    She runs out the door.
    At home shes asleep.
    He doesnt wake her.

    "Goodbye my love".





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    | Posted on 2008-09-06 00:00:00 | by seriouscutter19 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the end of the story, it's sad when somebody has to go away or yourself have to go and there isn't nothing you can do...
    | Posted on 2008-07-13 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]


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