Description: Seduction is perhaps the best game people get to play together. My technique is more polished, but this is essentially what me and most other men are thinking as we work our magic.
Your mama warned you about men like me - You understand?
I'm that fast sort of guy with the slow hands.
In this world of garter snakes you've met a python.
How long did you really want to keep them pants on?
I ain't gonna woo you with candy and gifts -
Just give you thoughts of Dirty Dancing with my hands on your hips.
After me baby you best give yourself to the Lord -
He's the only one who's got a shot at loving you more.
I drink gin straight and stay hard all night -
I'm the reward for being wrong so you don't wanna be right.
I'm the type of man who makes you feel like a woman -
The same type of man who makes you do things you shouldn't.
The same lips that are quick to say 'Glad to meet you -'
Are like artisan's hands and be glad to eat you.
Baby your other organs let me know they want my organ within -
I even got us a bye from the preacher so it won't be a sin.
well, I agree with blueorchids this line is, let's say, kind of strange. I think you could do better and reword it a bit. the rest is great. hot. I really like the line with Dirty Dancing in it. well done.
Baby your other organs let me know they want your organ within -
- take a close look at this line ... i'm not sure you meant it to read that way.
the title is so my life right now. damn hard to resist men and their artisan hands. as i read, i pictured a player smiling as he confidently whispered these words in my ear, low and smooth, hands on my hips and moving in slow circles. a hot piece for sure.
This is as rough as they come and well said. Let the reaser beware, for I think this is a warning sign of sorts rather than a sketch of an actual person. Point well made and may all be ready to run at first sighting.
Submission Name: Bedsheet Propaganda
