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    dots Submission Name: Dedicationdots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    19/M/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    6.75 - 152/124/105
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    Will I be dedicated to electric
    motion? Or to quests
    of a sword?

    Am I to dwell in the halls
    of the electric vision?
    Am I to wander continuously
    on mountains numerous and great?

    Where is the fire that burned
    in my heart? The torch of righteousness,
    how it has faded! The bonfire
    of the spirit, how it dies!

    The lamp is weak, barely shedding
    light in this dark world. Fill it with oil,
    fill it with wisdom and truth.

    Will I be dedicated to the One
    "who is, and who was, and who is coming?"
    Oh let it be so!
    Oh let me be born!




    Submitted on 2008-07-12 18:51:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very Strong and Powerful write
    My Friend I really Loved this write as you spoke Great truth
    The Lord is with you my Friend I can feel it in your words
    Let His Love guide you to Happiness
    Trust me on this Once you invite Him into your Heart all the pain is gone and reborn life begins anew
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    I will be Praying for you and your Family
    | Posted on 2008-07-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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