Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Human Conditiondots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 41/126/113
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 36
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 716



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHuman Conditiondots
    -------------------------------------------


    We're all the same before the eyes of vengeance
    Only numbers that soon will perish
    An endangered species whose existence endangers another species
    Controlling population through war and means of destruction

    We're all none other than pestilence
    Epidemically hostile with a contagious death wish
    A wild,pure, raw,and raging power yet vicious
    An abomination yet an intended creation

    A divine purpose,a supposed leader of existence
    Lost in a whirlpool of death,then vanish
    Fallen into a foul way of life,then deceased
    Dealing through judgment day without any objection
    A virtuous being yet lost in sinful world




    Submitted on 2008-07-12 19:29:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      bravo, very well written. you speak with volumes in your words. keep writing. check out my page with your comments
    | Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    163614



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry