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    dots Submission Name: Would this sway you?dots
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    Author: ax2x3m
    ASL Info:    21/m/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    2.53 - 24/24/14
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 731



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       Having a hard time telling this girl i like her.... wrote this since im getting really frustrated. let me know what you guys think.


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    dotsWould this sway you?dots
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    forgive the silence that we share
    for it is the only thing i would dare impart
    my fears so often holds me
    afraid to unleash what needs to be free

    these scars tell stories
    that my mouth has yet to sing
    though mended it aches for yesterday's break
    it prays for salvation through tomorrow wake

    off the cliffs i extend myself
    as these words all pray for an end
    it would take more than stiff lips to contain
    these messages that my body has failed to explain

    so would these words recede chance?
    carry you to an ocean overbearing
    or would this note sway you?
    transmit you and i into a warmth to fall into




    Submitted on 2008-07-12 19:36:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very well written. kudos! Keep up expressing in your writing. check out my page
    | Posted on 2008-07-17 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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