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    dots Submission Name: calleddots

    Author: to-wit
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    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    the almost blare me,larimy,rare me project.i know all about it.now using the word black hole is racist.i would like to see the case list.does anybody get the jist of this.pretentious matter.the obit.

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