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    dots Submission Name: A New Lovedots
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    Author: Fallyn Angel
    ASL Info:    19/F/CT
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 44/54/47
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 71
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 306



    Description:
       I wrote this for my boyfriend/fiancee shiosuke(aka dumbass)!


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    dotsA New Lovedots
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    Hands shaking.
    Lips quaking.
    Short breaths.
    Butterfly stomach.
    Hopeless devotion.
    Trust & understanding.
    Floating on clouds.
    New again.
    Open heart.
    I am yours.
    You are mine.
    We are each others.
    A new love for the ages.




    Submitted on 2008-07-13 16:37:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you quick to the point. where is your prince charming. keep writing. good piece
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      Good. Short, but sweet.
    So who is this new love and you need to talk to me missy!
    | Posted on 2008-07-13 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]


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