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    dots Submission Name: The Nightdots
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    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    1 Elite Years
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 42/38/26
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Nightdots
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    Night walkes in quietly
    only thing you can see is
    the bridge of darkness.
    Something is whispering
    warmly it touches your ear.
    Suddenly, but slowly
    moon starts to shine softly
    makes shadows of the trees
    and air turns freeze cold.
    You feel that something is watching
    it looks at you carefully.
    The night is watching
    the night is the thing what
    makes the you feel unexplained feeling.




    Submitted on 2008-07-13 16:38:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it seems as if you're saying that night is this thing that is so mysterious......lol....i get that feelin at times, but yea........this was a really nice piece of work and keep writing
    | Posted on 2008-08-05 00:00:00 | by Blackphoenix14 | [ Reply to This ]


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