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    dots Submission Name: Waves of Lifedots
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    Author: never_far_away
    ASL Info:    20-female-TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 105/92/53
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 690
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    Description:
       i actually wrote this poem at work...after a trip to the lake....yeah well hope y'all enjoy...it's pretty self explanitiory


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    dotsWaves of Lifedots
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    Rough seas continue their wake
    Never relenting their awesome power
    They rap against the shore,
    At which I stand,
    They crest and fall again and again
    I am reminded of
    My own mortality
    We grow, reach our peak
    Then fall, never to get back up
    The irony of the situation
    Is haunting
    In the end we are
    Just like the waves
    We grow, peak, the fall




    Submitted on 2008-07-13 18:14:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is excellent, and I really like the title. Comparing life to the ebb and flow of the tides and the waves is very poetic! I love poems with the Ocean or the Wind as the theme!
    | Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Brilliant!!! I'm back on this site after a really really loong time...and wow! was it worth the return!!

    This piece is going to be pinned up to my Personal Notice Board right on top of my PC!! A Master piece!!

    What a beautiful imagery!! You seriously are talented...to say so much with so few words really needs a genius...

    Faved!

    Best

    Aditya
    | Posted on 2008-08-06 00:00:00 | by psychoneurosis | [ Reply to This ]


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