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    dots Submission Name: You never guess my favorite songdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou never guess my favorite songdots
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    SEK,

    I know you're not a writer
    so here I am with words
    with melodic poetry
    no one has ever heard
    the eve of third two days ago
    my breath was taken twice
    I knew when you first looked at me
    you weren't like other guys
    four years between us, its matters not
    who cares that you are older
    I care that you're far, wish you were
    "two block away, or maybe closer"
    We sang the day away, our date was very long
    and one more thing 'fore I forget
    You never guessed my favorite song
    Glad we met before my flight
    Sad we had to say goodnight
    Pretty sure we both showed affection
    but not sure, hence, my 'missed connection'
    I've never posted once on here
    nor have I seen my name appear
    here I am, waiting for you to speak
    chivalry inspired romantically




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