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    Author: essence of life
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 33/38/21
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    This may surprise you but. I hate you!

    I can't tell you why I have no reason but I do.

    Ok I lied I hate you for likeing me.You like me when i don't.

    I ask you why you say "because."

    DAMNIT ALL!!! Like thats a answer I feel disconnected from my own self you like things bout me but all i see is mistakes so try again why am i liked?




    Submitted on 2008-07-14 04:00:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very out spoken. straight to the point. Bravo!!! you should read mine
    | Posted on 2008-07-14 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      it made me confuzzled but i liked it. is it really true? do u hate ppl? jk i know u do. keep writing
    | Posted on 2008-07-14 00:00:00 | by narutorules17 | [ Reply to This ]


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