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    dots Submission Name: The Unfortunate Anthropologistdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 1034/1091/516
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 62
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    dotsThe Unfortunate Anthropologistdots
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    The idol’s eyes, dead bronze, gave off despair,
    It sat upon its throne of auroch skulls,
    The peeling plasters’ paint showed pretty trulls
    With long and flowing sable locks of hair.
    I sensed there was some evil in the air
    And this my restless mind began to mull
    Yet now its eyes were bright, which had been dull,
    I watched it rise from off its grisly chair.

    I crossed the floor in one quick leap and bound,
    Yet heard those bronze legs crunch so close behind,
    My ringing fear was now too quickly crowned,
    As in its grasp I gasped and all went blind.
    Now in that temple grim, twice sinister,
    That idol has another minister.





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      Aaaah, unfortunate he be, and his efforts and talent little appreciated by the ghosts he has disturbed! Methinks this poor unfortunate soul will have much time to become acquainted with those ghosts whom he has rudely disturbed!

    Excellent and ghastly!
    | Posted on 2008-07-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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