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    dots Submission Name: The Darknessdots
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    Author: BusterLILblock
    ASL Info:    21/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 452/270/50
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Longing
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    It was not the darkness that lurred me in,

    it was the light that shunned me out.




    Submitted on 2008-07-14 22:20:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the innocent child searches the light
    while the infidel child burns down the night

    Just my thoughts regarding yours.

    Bill
    | Posted on 2010-06-28 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      To be worthy of light is the question your asking. Light is gifted not achieved, the life long struggle goes on.
    | Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by geekyslacker | [ Reply to This ]
      I know that! But I forgot...I remember you saying it...I can't believe I forgot what it meant...you've got to let a little hint to my brain...the door is closed. : (

    It was not the darkness that lurred me in,
    it was the light that shunned me out.

    bad memory.
    Sigh.
    | Posted on 2009-05-06 00:00:00 | by coloredstone | [ Reply to This ]
      very koool.its nice on its wn or it could be a beginning of a short story/poem or wht evr u want it to be.


    gud job buster.

    stay gold.
    | Posted on 2008-08-19 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      a great two liner. sound like a quote. keep writing. visit my page and read " Vision of my past"
    | Posted on 2008-07-22 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      This could be the great start of a short story or poem. I think that if you played around with the idea long enough, you could have something really cool.

    You could approach it from many different angles--vampires, ghouls, ghosts, the undead. Or you could make it something more about FEELING that way, and not so much BEING that way.

    I don't know. I just thought I'd toss some thoughts your way. Feel free to ignore them haha!

    :)
    | Posted on 2008-07-16 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]


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