Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: irkeddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Rue
    ASL Info:    16/F/the dark side
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 244/182/44
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 971
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 583



    Description:
       A short one, the middle verse isn't in the same rhyme scheme, thus its place in random thoughts.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsirkeddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Feeling irked is so tired,
    Put the feeling awayby getting wired,
    Ignore the urges to rant and yell,
    Those who you're irked at will never tell.

    Why do I feel this way?
    So annoyed, so irritated.
    So touchy and so aggrivated,
    So much like I want to seclude myself,
    but can't say no and thus must elude myself.

    I mean, how much scrutiny can one take?
    How much of a life can one fake?
    Hope to high hell your character doesnt break,
    but all in the same, your friends are at stake.




    Submitted on 2004-07-04 23:04:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      ...pay attention now, and I'll try to give you some insight into what you're feeling. You're 14 years of age right? That means that your body is going through some drastic change that is hormone driven. I know, everything is blamed on hormones, but it is true. Even the slightest imbalance causes havoc with fragile mindsets and emotional stability. The good news is this, it passes, by which time you'll have to deal with your parent's hormonal changes, but that passes too. But then of course you'll have to deal with your companion/spouse's hormonal changes and when that passes it'll be your turn again, after which your children will go through the same thing and then you'll have another go at smooth hormonal imbalance (and the third time is no better than the second which was only slightly better than the first)... I think you get the picture? There is and end to it all though, sooner or later you'll buy a tiny piece of land before your bereft family fight about the little that is left after you bought that plot, but you will be blisfully unaware in your final resting place...hopefully.
    | Posted on 2004-08-19 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    16368

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry