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    dots Submission Name: The Hardened Traveler (Eldiena)dots
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    Author: Peace_Maker
    ASL Info:    18/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 9/22/10
    Words: 277
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       This is a small description of the Celbest which are minotaur-like people. They belong to a game a friend and I are making, and I want to get a good description of them and the world around them. This may not tell much about how they look, but in due time...


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    dotsThe Hardened Traveler (Eldiena)dots
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    The blistering cold from the air around him almost felt like it complimented his muscular skin. Unlike the other races, his kind was able to with stand such a climate up in these mountains. That must of been why he hadn't seen many others around the trading posts at this time. Mt. Agrum was always like that from time to time. Usually the time to trade was when the great sun came over the mountain in the following months. No matter what, Tuk'Ga had to fufill his master's orders. Carrying a large package, he had to travel two days worth to meet up with an Etharian on the other side of the cliff. He had heard before that every race became infants for candy when it came to foriegn needs. The necessary tools for making ships was contained in the package, and only the Celbest(Tuk'Ga's people) had it.


    Tuk'Ga chuckled, leaving a heavy echo throughout the valley. Normally those that wanted to trade would have to wait for the spring, or come to his territory themselves. For some odd reason, this Etharian was an exception. What did Tuk'Ga know? For all the travel, this Etharian could be planning an attack. Were his people involved in something like this?
    It didn't concern him much on the journey though. Wild creatures like the Ravgull did. Mountain cats the size of Drakonair that kept a mouthful of large sharp razor-like teeth. Something one must keep an eye out for, and Tuk'Ga wasn't that great of a fighter. Being only a carrier in this operation, the idea of fending off such a beast made him eager to learn...




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