Somtimes we have to leave ones that we love, in order not to go down their dark path that they may be travling. Its not easy and can somtimes hurt, and make us angry. You show very well the anger part of this. If this is what you are writing about, I often times get things wrong. But its very good, when i read it, I could sense the anger and panic of needing to get out, of whatever the person was getting into. it reminds me of one of my poems that i wrote about this same subject, well this similaur subject. I still think that it would look better in verses, but that is just my opionon. So, thanks for posting it.
Submission Name: Stop Waisting My Time.
