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    dots Submission Name: don't expect anything from medots
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    Author: Kristen Gudsnuk
    ASL Info:    21/f/CT
    Elite Ratio:    5.62 - 182/229/86
    Words: 314
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 810
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2141



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    dotsdon't expect anything from medots
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    I can't talk about politics
    my words and values get confused
    I can't read the daily paper
    I fall asleep during the news

    I wish there were no genocide
    no hate or poverty
    but secretly I think inside,
    what does this matter to me?

    I'm lost, lost, lost
    What do I know, know, know?
    I'll never win this fight,
    I'll never show, my, true, flag

    I wish I knew all of those facts
    that everyone loves to spout
    I wish I had a clever reposte
    but my brain's in a drought

    Even when I read the news
    or catch it on TV
    it's never quite enough to mend
    my years of apathy

    Because I'm lost, lost, lost
    What do I know, know, know?
    I'll never win this fight,
    I'll never show, my, true, flag

    when you lend long diatribes, bout the economy
    I wish I knew if you are right, and if, perchance I agree

    But I'm lost, lost lost
    What do I know, know, know?
    I'll never win this fight,
    I'll never show, my, true, flag

    I'm lost, lost, lost
    I know nothing, at, all
    I have no pet cause
    Got political lockjaw
    I- I- I-

    so when you jump, on, me,
    so condescendingly,
    please just know, know, know,
    that I didn't read that article,
    I didn't take that class, oh no,
    I'll talk your ear off bout John Swift
    but labor laws, my lips are zipped,
    I never pretended to be
    on top of foreign policy
    Anything that's pertinent
    to any social movement,
    I'm just not on that continent
    I'm sorry!!!

    I'm lost, lost, lost
    What do I know, know, know?
    I'll never win this fight,
    I'll never show, my, true, flag

    I'm lost, so lost
    don't expect much from me
    because my world of paint
    doesn't need reality




    Submitted on 2008-07-15 19:30:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can't talk about politics
    my words and values get confused
    I can't read the daily paper
    I fall asleep during the news

    I wish there were no genocide
    no hate or poverty
    but secretly I think inside,
    what does this matter to me?



    Don't mind the mountains
    Don't mind the sea
    Don't mind discussing politics
    cause I really need the sleep

    Vote for Obama
    Vote for McCain
    They're both cheap sedatives
    For an underwhelmed indifferent brain

    I'd paint them pretty
    All yellow, golden bright
    As halos nailed to angels
    Without a hanging chad in sight

    One, two - it's money that I love
    Three, four - it's money that I love

    :)

    | Posted on 2008-07-16 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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