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    dots Submission Name: what do we live for dots
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    Author: littlepoet
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    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    what do we live for
    the heart says
    I live for those who love me
    those who kind and true
    & human ties that bind
    but can also bring hope.

    but many would say
    your going to suffer
    & yes I will
    I have learned
    from my mistakes
    but love hurts

    even when we are most afraid
    I live to grow closer &
    more intimate
    as the years pass by that's what you'll find
    and your fear will wane
    and they are there for not

    we all grow wiser
    and see a little clear
    but we all keep a little serect
    so that men will draw a little near
    we live to learn their story
    amid of all the regrets

    as they sleep
    hail the season
    we all shall have a reason
    and one goal
    for a man to love me for who I'm
    and those who know me true




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      It brings you down to earth. very relaxing. Keep writing. check out my page.
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