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Escape to loath

Author: Gothic Misery
ASL Info:    25/F/NV
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Escape to loath

A smokey sintiment shifts in me once again
I am winced at the aweful smell it brings
Submission is without notice and I strive to hold myself
Compassion and disgrace splinters at the least
and my tolerance lingers all too late
Insufficient prayers desired
Confusion tangles my thoughts and holds my cattiness
Peaceful dyed-in-the-wool is longed from the fibers that consumes my adoration
Oh, is there not one?
Lack of fortitude left you with insecurities I do not want
These white framed doors are made against view of you
I cannot help to wonder how hard it gets to cherish
When benevolent is the object of my attachment
Natural consequences ofcourse are to be had
Although the willing course I settle with will be without a doubt troublesome to make.

Submitted on 2008-07-16 05:20:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  sloth! white infidel oar +/- 4

a plague of locusts to desert womb.
| Posted on 2009-05-24 00:00:00 | by InNoMood44Play | [ Reply to This ]
  I see your point, very direct. Keep up your style.
| Posted on 2008-07-16 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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