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    dots Submission Name: On the Other Handdots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 756
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 237



    Description:
       A Nonet poem; nine consecutive syllables from one to nine in nine lines.


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    dotsOn the Other Handdots
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    God
    exists
    in my world
    and I believe
    and trust in His Word.
    Yet, on the other hand,
    God will not be mocked by fools
    or reveal Himself to scoffers
    until the Day of Judgment arrives.




    Submitted on 2008-07-16 13:21:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Seen as I wont be back here... Romans 1:3 .. so who was your messiah? Was he from the house of David? Was he mortal? He was of the seed after all. track back and see where that importance laid.

    God save our wayward souls that havenít a clue.
    | Posted on 2008-08-14 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
      I think the line, "and I believe
    and trust in His Word."

    could be changed to, I know and trust, to strengthen the power of the connection and the faith implied. Not trying to change it you understand.;)
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I give you kudos for a difficult feat. I didn't count any missed syllables so you're good there, and I like your message.

    I enjoy your faith based writings. They are refreshing and different from many other writers on this site. I hope that you continue to post them, as I will continue to read them if you do.

    Have a Glorious day, dear friend.
    | Posted on 2008-07-16 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]


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