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    dots Submission Name: Last Moments of an Aerial Hunted Wolfdots
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    Author: Cosmowolf38
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 301
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       Another wolf poem and again, no rhyme pattern.


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    dotsLast Moments of an Aerial Hunted Wolfdots
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    Bang! Bang! I feel the silver pain hit me in the rear.
    Bang! Bang! A couple more come as I try to run away across the bitter cold Great White.
    I bite at my backside in agony as if to chase them out of me.
    As I run my hardest to get away, I hear the Great Metal Bird come after me.
    I can finally run no more, I must lie down.
    I'm panting and can barely breathe. I still feel the pain as it weakends my body.
    My paws hurt from the ice and Great White. I feel dizzy and ready to die.
    What did I do wrong? I thought I was doing great and taking care of my pack as Alpha.
    I helped everyone out and helped my mate with the pups!
    I guess I must have done something wrong to die like this in complete agony.
    I lie here as I feel my spirit leaking out as red.
    I think about about my new pups. Whose going to help my mate take care of them?
    Whose going to teach them to hunt and be strong so that they can become Alphas of their own pack someday.
    As these thoughts run through my head, I hear the Great Metal Bird crunch as it lands on the ground.
    I hear the dreaded footsteps of man as he comes to take my life, as well as the rest of the pack.
    I know he'll get them, even though I try my best to stop him.
    He got me, and he'll soon get the others.
    I hear him near me, then hear the bang of the machine that brings in the pain.
    I see all black now as I feel my spirit leave me, to wander lost through this barbaric world.




    Submitted on 2008-07-16 14:12:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      how sad Your poem was written very well
    it touched my heart the very thought of a wolf
    being killed hurts my soul
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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