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    dots Submission Name: the burial of seasonsdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe burial of seasonsdots
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    roman skin,
    let out your blood
    the way that
    the river does.
    all boiled
    & full of the roots
    of the world.

    i breathe in
    the moss of always
    like your flesh.
    all-mother awaits me
    in the crook
    of the tree,
    crooked
    & full of the leaves
    that decay into her.

    i polish away
    her rosy
    wood surface
    to find beneath it,
    the purplish sap
    of her heathered insides.
    she is me.
    i have always
    known this.

    i take away from her
    the loss of everything.
    the renewal
    of the hundred year oak,
    the burial of seasons
    amongst her.
    i find my own memory
    traveling on the milky wind
    without wings
    or feathers
    to pass into.

    we are becoming the beast,.
    & we are everywhere,
    eyes like
    something never ignored
    & snoring...




    Submitted on 2008-07-16 23:19:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lovely
    the seasons do affect people in many ways
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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