I'm Gray II by muhammed

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Submission Name: I'm Gray II dots

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Author:	muhammed
ASL Info:	23/male/Egypt
Elite Ratio:	2.35 - 87/124/111
Words:	55

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	53
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I'm Gray II dots

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I walk away from
the one who drinks
and the people who pray ...

I don't have soft hands
or custom covered with sand

I have a littel of everything
enough to dream ..
to regret

may be tomorrow
I will ...
yes I will

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