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    dots Submission Name: Into A Downward Spiral!dots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    18-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 102/231/186
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 56
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    dotsInto A Downward Spiral!dots
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    You walked back into my life
    And everything was great again.
    I could smile without faking it..
    And I could laugh without it hurting.

    And then there's another new girl..
    She's on your voicemail.
    She's all over your MySpace.
    And I feel myself falling into the darkness.

    You say she's just a friend..
    But a friend wouldnt be with you all the time.
    You say it will never happen
    But I see that look in your eyes.

    And I'm falling into a downward spiral.
    If you could see my heart..
    Wait! What heart?
    It's shattered at your feet.




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      I really don't like it that well. It shows vulnerability and jealous. I did like the little sarcasm at the end though how he should see what he did but can't because he has the heart shattered without knowing it.
    | Posted on 2008-10-02 00:00:00 | by DemonofHeaven | [ Reply to This ]
      you being deep with your poetry. good job
    | Posted on 2008-07-17 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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