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    Author: vegetable
    ASL Info:    16/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    6.94 - 18/17/16
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 52
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 524



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    No instructor
    of the comfort
    found in evening wear,
    or the healthy glow
    of sickness,
    ever taught me to create
    a craving
    for sloppy kisses
    and sweaty palms
    while they visit
    the far side of an ocean.

    No manufactured mask
    is befitting of such a scene.
    I over act. I project.
    Can you see this,
    Way in back?
    Observe my longing,
    my emptiness
    for a boy
    I'd rather hold in theory.




    Submitted on 2008-07-17 21:45:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      there's a quiet beauty i found in this piece: of longing far too familiar and draining. the simplicity of this belies the calm frenzy of emotions you portray deftly here.

    bittersweet.
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]



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