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    dots Submission Name: Remindersdots
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    Author: Old
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 57/77/62
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Ah yes. Everything is fine.
    On and on continues
    the acidic melting of time.

    Life is wonderful
    until it is remembered
    that everything is what it is.




    Submitted on 2008-07-18 00:36:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write to me though very short easily shows that some things in Life can be changed but sadly not everything
    I strongly believe that as well
    I am a strong believe in the fact that almost all of what we need to know in life is developed in the first 12 years of our lives
    How I wish more children would realise that and try their hardest to learn all they can during these times
    Great Job!!!
    This definately made me think
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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