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    dots Submission Name: Wardots
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    Author: sapphyreravyn
    ASL Info:    16/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 3/15/21
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 75
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    Bytes: 700



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    dotsWardots
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    Years of death surround our past.
    Years for some they can never get back.
    How many should die
    For an act so long ago.
    Too long and it rages on.

    I dream of a land of the free.
    But how can we be free
    In this place that causes death.
    A land that takes peoples lifes away.
    It isn't fair
    Not to us not to them

    We are dying too.
    Our numbers growing less.
    Parent's children going away so young
    Some never to return.
    When well it end?
    How long shall it last?
    Will we ever see an end?
    I think not.
    For when it does
    There will always be more.




    Submitted on 2008-07-18 05:31:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yes there will always be war. nice poetry, i like the first part the best but all of it is really good. i can tell, i think, that you are a feeler. i am also a feeler and so war makes me sad. duh, it's sad to lose so many people to something so... unnecessary. anyway, hope to see more from you.
    - Elizabeth
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by informations | [ Reply to This ]



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