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    dots Submission Name: Painted Skullsdots
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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    19/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 32/53/55
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 108
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    dotsPainted Skullsdots
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    Searchers for the run aways
    Are binging on the pleasures
    Of looking- stay run aways

    No shame on the tramp roving
    Spitting on the people sitting
    In love with the streets- stay roving

    We make the runners still
    Still for our lonely heart
    Then let them run into the night

    How could you lose that charm?
    Strobe lit into passion, hunted
    How did I lose that charm?

    And make these moments unwanted
    Clear seekers, we saw you
    Sculled, weary and restless

    But I had a dusty dream
    Which never dreamt of ageing and
    Which was coolly preserved for this moment

    And was seeped into those veins
    Never to forget my name
    Never to leave my empty side

    But the watchman's eyes are tired
    And so sick of them blue
    Brown and green gems of death

    We, my friend set them run aways free
    In our flowing, endless pursuit of thee
    We, my friend, you and me.





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