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    dots Submission Name: Crash down on medots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    19/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 46/127/89
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsCrash down on medots
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    I grow tired of the irrelevent reasons you hold me back for
    I'm not as persistent as I used to be
    The world's getting warmer all around me
    And I just keep falling out of reach

    All the trust I filled my heart up for you
    Just won't come crashing down
    I'm still a believer and hold onto judegment
    is it a mistake or just plain dumb?




    Submitted on 2008-07-18 15:08:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      can relate its funny how we build realities in our thought process and some tower over others when they are held to such degree. one day they,re gone and your faced with understanding who you are becuase you never new how much you liked this person and there company. you give this feeling of seperation. cool write.
    | Posted on 2008-07-28 00:00:00 | by temporal nights | [ Reply to This ]


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