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    dots Submission Name: A Moment Of Weaknessdots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    18-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 102/231/186
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Moment Of Weaknessdots
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    A moment of weakness..
    A time of fear..
    My heart was beating fast..
    And all I could hear was ringing in my ear.
    I should have called 911
    But I called my mom instead.
    She told me to calm down
    To take a medicine unknown to me..
    I tried to get you to understand
    But you just called me mean..

    [[I think my heart is breaking]]

    I feel like I'm about to cry now
    You said I should 'win you back'
    and bye..

    I feel alone.
    And cold.
    And used..
    Because now it's like you want only my body
    And not me..

    You said you thought I was different
    But it's me who was wrong I guess..

    Hate me if you want to
    Love me if you can.

    I dont think I'm able to be loved.
    Apparently not.
    Because in just 5 minutes
    You dropped me on the spot

    My heart is hurting now
    Because I let you in..
    The tears are coming now..
    And my world is starting to spin..

    [[I just wish you would understand]]




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